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Bionicle MOC: O-jin by 3rdeye88 Bionicle MOC: O-jin by 3rdeye88
Here's an updated picture of O-jin, who's been in my gallery for a while. I added a couple of ornate pieces to his thigh, I\'m thinking of doing a full fledged HF update to him since he wouldn't need much and I've got some white HF armor. I've given some thought to his back story as well, I've determined that he's of Skakdi origins, not sure if I want him to be undead or not.

For those of you that are new to him, here's a little bit about him

O-jin. (ow jean), Malevolence, sadism, insanity, animosity and evil incarnate. Perhaps the nastiest Villain one could come across. He is a ruthless killer. He's rather tactless and quite mad as well. Its rumored that he's not even alive, that he is a demon or apparition. Anyone who is said to have seen the eyes of this demon were slain by him for that very act on its own. O-jin's strength doesn't necessarily lye in physical strength or speed, but more so his quick unpredictable fighting and skillful use of his scythe.

I drew from a Japanese influence on this character. for instance his hat. It is suppose to be a shallow rice hat. His face is also suppose to be something Japanese. Oni, which means "demon" in japanese are popularized in japanese folklore Oni usually have horns and a very Toothy mouth or smile. Samurai often would wear masks of oni as a scare tactic. I wanted him to basically be a Japanese ice demon. His scythe was a natural choice. He's also supposed to have a hint of "death" in him, which is why he's somewhat skeletal looking and he has the scythe.
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O-jin
I actually never said a lot about O-jin.
So now I thought I could do so through this critique.
O-jin is one very good designed Toa sized MOC. His clean color scheme has a very smooth effect and the different colors are well spread over the whole body. However, there are some parts I would exchange for different colored parts; the white foot part on his lower body always makes me think that his lower body is naked, because my brain is interpreting the color white as O-jins skin color. The same goes for O-jins hat. Because his hat and his head are both white they visually merge together to one entity, which creates a weird effect. Both problems can be solved by exchanging them for different colored ones, maybe even choosing a bigger hat like this one: [link] in light grey, which would work out because O-jins weapon is silver. I'd really like to see the upper middle picture with that hat!
It's also sad that the inner head piece is only available in trans-light blue and not in O-jins trans color.

I've not a lot to complain about the techniques used on him. I'm a huge fan of his upper legs and I think his torso continues the skeleton like look of his head really well. Only the lower legs are a bit short in my opinion and they should also be set apart from the lower arms. I would suggest to customize the lower legs.

Everything else about this MOC is really nice. I think I already sait this once, but I would an O-jin set if it wouldn't be too expensive.
What do you think?
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Well, since you requested critiques on this moc, I shall be giving you some, even though you probably do not know me or my work.

To begin, let's start with what I like about this moc alot: the Hat on top of the Piraka head, the upperlegs and the way you've armoured the upper back are absoluteley my favorite parts about the moc. They are what gives him much of his profile and they give him a lifelike sense of realism. A Skakdi with this appearance seems very likely in a good way.

There are of course also things with the moc I personally do not like, but those things are not neccesarily faults of the moc itself, its more that my negatives are about design choices I would not prefer. Firs of all, the colorscheme. It looks god and consistent, but I would've traded the gunmetal for black. I'm not a big fan of the way you have connected the upper and lower body sections either. The single hordika joint kind of sticks out on an otherwise perfect back and it makes his butt stick out a bit to much IMO.

This is all I have to say about the moc. I like the character and the asthetics quite alot and I must say that it really stands out as one of the more original mocs I've seen. Hope this all helped.

And on another note, sorry for the mistake. Feel free to remove my earlier post!
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skyking96 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Nice scythe
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. :D
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louimath Featured By Owner Nov 14, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
awsome... but i would say he is a skakdi warlord of somthing like that.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Nov 15, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. :shrug: He's a skakdi something or other. I don't really know, I haven't given a whole lot of thought to his back story.
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louimath Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Ya well, Pirakas are from the Skakdi race and you used a piraka head,so...
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Nov 16, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I know, I just wasn't thinking Skakdi warlord. More like undead skakdi ice apparition.
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KVENOM Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012
He looks badass enough to be one hell of a great boss in some overawesome game! nice!
BTW, I think, his voice and speach manner should be simmilar to the Hollow Ichigo's(aka Hichigo)(from Bleach)
well, he can become one overbadass bounty hunter, i think))))
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Jul 18, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you. Yeah he looks pretty tough. I wouldn't want to fight him, whether it be a video game or if I were a bionicle and facing him. HE'S SCARY!

I'm sorry, I don't watch bleach, so that reference is lost on me. Can you link me a video clip from youtube?
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KVENOM Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012
[link]

[link]

Hichigo is the crazy fella with the yeloow eyes, which has black sclera.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Jul 22, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh I see. Why'd you give me the japanese version. Doesn't do me much good if I can't understand what he's saying and how the voice would say things in english. :/
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KVENOM Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
well, his laughter sounds much more crazier with original version(and his english voice is too soft)

[link]

[link] =p1
[link] =p2
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KVENOM Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2012
BTW, maybe you should add some sort of chain to the scythe, to make his moves more crazy, vicious, and give him ability distance(like Kratos or Hollow Ichigo)

1337 EXAMPLE(with cloth, not chain, but who cares):
[link]
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mrkillzo Featured By Owner Mar 23, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
really like.

nuff said.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Mar 24, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. :)
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mrkillzo Featured By Owner Mar 26, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
welcome =D
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11garfield Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012
Cool. That is awesome!!
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks...again. :P
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Nazgul4 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012
The Japanese touch combined with the skeleton parts look really great!
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Jan 30, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you. He's gonna get a more "skeletal" upgrade soon I think.
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RattrapsTail Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist General Artist
Well, since you requested critiques on this moc, I shall be giving you some, even though you probably do not know me or my work.

To begin, let's start with what I like about this moc alot: the Hat on top of the Piraka head, the upperlegs and the way you've armoured the upper back are absoluteley my favorite parts about the moc. They are what gives him much of his profile and they give him a lifelike sense of realism. A Skakdi with this appearance seems very likely in a good way.

There are of course also things with the moc I personally do not like, but those things are not neccesarily faults of the moc itself, its more that my negatives are about design choices I would not prefer. Firs of all, the colorscheme. It looks god and consistent, but I would've traded the gunmetal for black. I'm not a big fan of the way you have connected the upper and lower body sections either. The single hordika joint kind of sticks out on an otherwise perfect back and it makes his butt stick out a bit to much IMO.

This is all I have to say about the moc. I like the character and the asthetics quite alot and I must say that it really stands out as one of the more original mocs I've seen. Hope this all helped.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Jan 19, 2012  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you for this, I'll accept this if that's how you want to present it, but to give a Critique on a deviation that actually has the critique feature turned on, you click on the critique box and a form for it comes up. That also lets you rate it with stars for various categories. So if its not too much trouble, could you go back and put it there? You can just copy and paste what you've said here if you want. Thanks. :)
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JohnWarrior90 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011
Cool. Like the grim reaper. I'm just saying, he almost has some similarities the way he look and the description you wrote. like it though.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. Yeah The Grim Reaper was an influence, like I mentioned in the description. That's why he's kinda skeletal and has the scythe.
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Lol-Pretzel Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011
Very cool, dynamic posing, pretty unusual colour scheme too.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks Gringat, lord of the laughing pretzels and not a guy named Nathaniel. :) The white and trans blue is supposed to be ice colors(duh) the gunmetal is because that fit into the group scheme: two with gunmetal, two with bright gold, two with silver. The dark grey is because I didn't have anything else more suitable and it looks okay with the gunmetal. Aiden mentioned the color scheme to and I forgot to mention the fact that the Matoro blue is representative of ice/energy.
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KuroEtShiro Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
WAAAAAAAAAAAAH! HE'S SO OSSIM! :D
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Fanks Kuro. :meow:
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SideShowShayne Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
I really love those upper Legs.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. :) They're nothing too special, but thanks. :)
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EndureSquare Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
epic moc :D
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. :)
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DeviantArtistMax Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
I am new to him, have to say he is deadly. And concept on him is my fav.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thank you. :) Heh Even though he's already in my gallery, I knew some people either forgot about him, or never discovered him cause he's in the back. That's why update pics are good. :)
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DeviantArtistMax Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Welcome.
Yep.
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Wretched--Stare Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist General Artist
Very cool my friend love the back story to, I heard tales of the Oni, the unclean spirits of the dead and the Tengu ,the bird-like Tengu Demon is a skilled warrior and mischief maker.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
He actually doesn't have much of a bionicle cannon back story. I need to do his but my research tool website is down. :( I can't look up the race of bionicle he's supposed to be. :iconsadnessplz: :iconinternetplz::iconfailedplz:
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DarkSpireProduction Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011
I fuckin' love this.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. Edit it if you'd like to. If you need the full size pic I'll send it.
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sniperray213 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
sweet design dude it is so custom :D
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks Ray. Its not that custom, the lower limbs, hands and feet still are standard. But I might change up the lower limbs. The feet may just stay the same.
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sniperray213 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
np and kool :)
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ChaoticUmbra Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
I really like O-jin. He's a unique MOC and the fact that you drew influence from Japanese folklore makes him really interesting.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. :D I think its mostly that hat, take it away and he becomes a lot more typical I think. I agree, the influence really makes me want to know more about him. I wanted to write out his back story more, but I couldn't cause biosector is I guess reworking itself and so I couldn't do the research I needed. When writing in bionicle I like to keep things as cannon as I can.
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ChaoticUmbra Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
It's funny how much personality a couple of parts can add. :)

At least you're not writing in the Bionicle language. That would be a little bit TOO canon.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
It really is, or like a couple of Aiden's(maple) MOCs where the whole thing is built around one part.

Hehe, yeah it would be, just a bunch of circles with lines and dots in them. XD
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ChaoticUmbra Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Student General Artist
Surprisingly, I still remember some of the letters from it. :lol:
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Really? Heh I don't. I remember they were lines and dots and slashes but not which one went to which letter.
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ChaoticUmbra Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2011  Student General Artist
Some of them were really obvious. O, T, K, and X especially. Those are really the only ones I remember, and that's just because they're the regular letter inside of a circle. :giggle:
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Dec 19, 2011  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh okay. Its been so long since I've seen the alphabet so I don't remember.
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Her00fRand0m Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2011  Hobbyist Artist
this is so cool!
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