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Bionicle MOC: Lt. Premod by 3rdeye88 Bionicle MOC: Lt. Premod by 3rdeye88
About the MOC
Lieutenant Premod was a MOC I had roughly conceptualized when I first saw series 1 of the Star Wars Planet series. I have the Sebulba's podracer and Tatooine variant. Charade from the Soul Calibur series of video games was a big source of inspiration for Premod. He is where I got the initial "eyedea'(:iconpunfunplz:) to use the planet sphere parts as a big eyeball. The rest of Premod is simply my own take on the "giant eyeball monster" concept.

P.R.E.M.O.D. was his working title, it stands for Punk Rock Eyeball Monster Of Death. His actual name is just "Premod" The acronym was me being humorous about what to call him when explaining what he was to friends and family. First he was just an eyeball monster, once he got spiky he became a "punk rock eyeball monster," then to make the acronym more pronounceable, he became a "punk rock eyeball monster of death."

A couple of interesting facts.
Premod uses a design I tried to make work for Lord Gweeb but couldn't get to work. The main element of this design is the Hero Factory 1.0 torsos as shoulders. :iconsuccess-plz:
Premod's photo collage is made exactly the same as Gweebs, except the orientation of the photos and therefore the layout is flipped(gweebs were portrait, Premod is landscape). :D

Also, the photo of Premod chasing his eyeball is just for laughs, he doesn't actually have a problem with his eye coming out, both IRL as a MOC or hypothetically as a character. its really just to show the eye not in his body. It does pop in and out relatively easy though, which is convenient when working on the MOC. :P

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Bio
Premod is an officer in Lord Gweeb's army and serves as Gweeb's right hand man. While his ranking is officially only that of a Lieutenant, Premod is a trusted ally of Gweeb's and has far more tenure and clout than even those exceeding his rank. He chooses not to be a higher ranking official because he prefers to be a combatant more than a member of the millitary and political councils. He much prefers to be be Gweeb's "will on the battle field." This is not to say that Premod is a dumb brute, he is a decent tactician and a skilled fighter. Premod prefers basic strategies and contingencies over meticulous plotting and calculating like his lord.

Premod and Gweeb came to know each other in The Pit as they were contained in adjacent cells. Besides the maintainers of the Jail, Premod is the only person to know of Gweeb prior to Gweeb's mutation by the Pit Mutagen. However neither warriors ever saw each other as they were never released from their cells and could not see each other through the walls. After the Cataclysm both prisoners were freed. In the franticness Premod escaped unharmed, while Gweeb was horribly mutated into a small stubby crustacean like creature. It wasn't until many years later after Gweeb had been found by the Barraki and rose through the ranks, eventually assembling his own army and notoriety that the two were reunited. It didn't take long before they recognized each other as their former cell neighbors and quickly allied with each other. By this time Gweeb was already establishing his on territory with its own military and government. But because Premod was still a newcomer to the organization, he wasn't made a high ranking official just yet. Premod remained content with his position and simply chose to control a small territory within Gweeb's and command what is known as the first legion-a group of highly regarded warriors loyal to Premod and Gweeb who are called upon for missions of high tactical importance.

Premod's body is very similar to Gweeb's in that it is an external mechanized suit constructed by Gweeb himself. However, Premod did not need a new body after being injured or mutated, he opted for the transformation in order to be an amphibious creature and reside in the underwater territories along with Gweeb, while still being able to traverse land. Premod is more acclimated to land and therefor land combat than Gweeb is and spends far more time on land than his lord. All of his body except for his eye which was the main part of his body was replaced. Premod communicates via a vocalizer in his mechanical body where as in his original biological form he could only communicate through a mild form of telepathy. This telepathy is only slightly enhanced so that his biological component(his eye) can operate his mechanical body. He does not possess any telepathic or telekinetic abilities strong enough to be used as attacks.

Premod's main weapons are his dual "rotary Axes." These axes are especially useful for throwing. Premod will often throw one axe one way(i.e clockwise) and counter throw the second(i.e counter clockwise) and the two axes will meet up mid flight and connect together, creating one counter rotating weapon that when struck with is a devastating attack. Besides his axes he has sharp claws and his armor on his back is incredibly thick and jagged, making it good for ramming attacks. Like most fighters, Premod can channel energy through his weapons, though he does not have any particular traits or skills with this power. He mostly relies on his axes and melee attacks in combat. Premod has no elemental energies.

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:iconfenrek:
Well now this'll be fun.
First off congratz on another totally mystifying moc that just might be totally unique. I haven't seen the entire span of lego mocs around, well no-one has but I've never seen anything like this before.

The use of the mini Star Wars sphere is very clever here. I certainly wouldn't of thought of it as an eye that's for sure but making that descision brought forth the overal size of the moc.
To decide to have this as a squat character based on the idea of having the planet as an eye is pretty predictable. The most logical thing was to put the eye in the centre of a 'cavity' placed within the centre of the moc which you've done here and pulled off very well. You've made good coverage overal to make sure the eye can't be seen from other angles and that the only place where you can see any of the original planet sphere is at the front.

The design of the body itself is a bit generic for the 'eyeball' monster look with it being squat and having disproportionate limbs. The arms just look too thin and the hands are quite small. I only think it partially works here. The upper arms are clearly coordinaed with the silver weapon pieces but even at this state they look sort of mish-mashed.
The legs however are much better. They are bulked up to a great level which looks like they may just support the creatures oversized torso.
The weapons are simple but I guess they do work here and as they're not the main focus of the moc it's not ,much of a disappointment really.
The overal detail of the moc is fantastic. I can clearly see how you've coordinated the pieces into the forms that they now take but even in this coordination, there still seems to be a 'messy' element there. Organised chaos would be the most apt term I can think of here. There are the rounded, defined areas such as the eye detailing and the lower arms but then you get to the surrounding eye area, the cavity if you will, and there seems to be wires and weapons and all sorts of pieces just plugged on for bulk.

Overal this moc is pretty unique even though it does show a generic/classic image of the 'eyeball monster'. But after saying that, it's very unique for someone to even make it to begin with so props on that.
Another cool creation for Dave :)
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Uuuugh.....OK, this is gonna be a tough one. You know that feeling when you look at something and aren't entirely sure what it is until 10 minutes after? Well, that's the feeling I get when I look at this, which makes it kind of hard to critique. I'll go back and explain this later, because I want to get to some other things about this first.

Yes, the idea of a giant eye with a bunch of limbs sticking off of it is kind of cool. However, it would be more cool if the eye actually looked like an eye. It looks more like a corroded potato with a hand grabbing onto it. This could have been fixed with some paint, but nope. Corroded potato.

The feet look like a bunch of feet jammed together with a lame-ass heel spur. I don't care if the heel spur works if it looks that bad. It may work in toy form, but if this were a real hulking monster, this guy would tip over at the drop of a hat due to them snapping like kitkat bars under a truck.

The spikes on top of the thing all look like they would snap as soon as he hit anything harder than a brick wall. So how is this guy expected to charge at anything?

What I'm about to say might seem like two of the most petty complaints of all time, but fuck it. The font is incredibly ugly. It's hard to read, and just looks like Satan puked from a pen.

The posing is uninspired, which might have something to do with this guy being too bulky to actually pose decently.

Those last two complaints were ridiculously petty, but I put them in anyway, because anything that can be improved should be listed.

Now, here's the part where I generally say a few nice things before delivering the final blow with a wooden stake. The fact that the eye actually stays in the thing is commendable, it actually looks stable, which is good, the ideas are somewhat creative, and there's lots of detail on the thing, so I can't fault it for looking plain. Now, remember what I said in the beginning, about it being hard to tell what exactly this thing is?

You see, there's so much detail, that it looks like a hideous mess. The thing is overflowing with blades, spikes, armor chunks, and random greebling that never really goes anywhere. It makes the thing hard to look at, and it took me over 10 minutes to actually see anything but a cluttered mess in this thing. You may say that this was intentional to make it look "punk." Well, if this were actually punk, it wouldn't look so much like a mechanical porcupine potato monster from the fifth dimension.

So yeah, if all of those flaws were fixed, I would deem this kind of epic.
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:iconbioman44:
bioman44 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Really cool
reminds me of the cabal from Destiny
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Nov 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks.
I don't know what those are. :shrug:
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LordoftheVillains Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Sometimes when I want to buy pieces for my Bionicle mocs I look at lego sets(the planet in the middle of its chest) and I say "Nah, that won't be of use", but then when I look at stuff like this I say at the top of my lungs"EBAY!!!".
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:lmao: Thank you, that gave me quite a laugh. There's also Bricklink. Its a very useful site for getting exactly what you want. Ebay is the carpet bomb. Covers a wide area, but you don't really fully know what you're getting, or in this analogy, what you're blowing up. Bricklink is the laser guided missile though. You know exactly what you're getting because you hand pick the order from the seller's inventory. It takes some getting used to the site navigation, but its a useful tool to any serious MOCer.
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LordoftheVillains Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why thanks(specially on the laugh part, it makes me happy to make one laugh), but if you don't mind I'm going to be spending some $$$.MONEH 
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Oct 12, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:lol: have fun. :XD:
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hellfire1999 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
DUDE YOU FOUND A USE FOR THE STAR WARS PLANET BALL THINGS OMG AWESOME LOVE IT IM WATCHING YOU
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Apr 28, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:lol: A lot of people have found uses for those, especially the system MOCers. I have at least two more MOCs I'd like to do if i could get my hands on more of these(of the various types). I've seen the space ship MOCers use them as like escape pods or fuel tanks, I've seen the architecture guys use them for domes in buildings like you see in a lot of middle eastern architecture. Then there's this guy who's used them as actual heads....and those eyes, they're held on by magnets wedged into the tires and on on the inside of the sphere. These aren't hard to use really. But I appreciate your enthusiasm and all the love, the comment, faves and watch. :hug: Thank you. :blush:
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:iconhellfire1999:
hellfire1999 Featured By Owner Apr 29, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I have the death star and tatooine. Maybe they would be good outer shells to do something similar to your hydrebawl dude
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:icon3rdeye88:
3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They could be. I've been wanting to get two of the lower halves of the death star, the part without the dent because I wanna make this guy.
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hellfire1999 Featured By Owner May 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
MARVIN!!!
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:icon3rdeye88:
3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 2, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:dummy: YAUS! :la:
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:iconhellfire1999:
hellfire1999 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
book was better than the movie xD
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 3, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Agreed. Though I didn't get terribly far into the book. I have bad eyesight and I try reading books but I don't want to strain my eyes and make them worse than they already are. So reading from books is difficult for me. What I did read though I enjoyed immensely though.
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Jedder7 Featured By Owner Apr 21, 2014
You saw a Lego Starwars Set series, and you thought of this.

XD Love it.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. Yeah It s a big sphere thing with two connection points on either end. Looked perfect for  big eyeball. And from there I thought of Charade from Soul Calibur, and Mike Wazouski a little bit. :P
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Jbear1999 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
holy sh*t that thing must be f***ing huge
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. He's decent size, but he's nothing compared to sayyyy.....Bionicle MOC: Ryakk by 3rdeye88 this guy or.....Bionicle MOC Mototaur 3.0 by 3rdeye88 this dude. :giggle:

But ya know its not all about size. Sometimes the smallest MOC can still be a good one. Bionicle MOC: Snip by 3rdeye88  
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Jbear1999 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I meant in gearth and density but you are right sometimes the small guy is the good one.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Apr 27, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I guess? He's not dense at all though. Premod is Hollow cause he's basically a big walking eye socket, and the eye itself is hollow. :XD: I think the only merit he as as one of my MOCs is that he's my most spiky MOC. He's not my biggest, or widest, or tallest, or densest. He's really really spiky though. :P
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Jbear1999 Featured By Owner May 6, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I will give you that he dose look spiker than my moc of spikes note do not try to bild a toa of spikes they hert. 
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 7, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:lol: EH I I think I could handle a Toa of spikes. :P
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:iconjbear1999:
Jbear1999 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
try building it with raiser blades.
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:icon3rdeye88:
3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 8, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
No thanks. That would indeed hurt.
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CelticSpartan Featured By Owner Sep 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
He looks like a variant of the Big Daddy from bioshock that would have a one hit kill.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
A lot of people compared him to Big Daddy, which is funny cause I made Big Daddy.
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CelticSpartan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Yeah I saw your Big Daddy before I saw PREMOD, thats how I made the connection.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Ahh I see. Usually its the other way around "He looks like big daddy"
*shows them big daddy*
*they freak out*

:lol:
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CelticSpartan Featured By Owner Sep 14, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I can see that happening a lot.
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:icon3rdeye88:
3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Sep 15, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, its happened a few times. :P
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Haveniceday5 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013
Hahaha he drop he's eye ball troll 
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Aug 26, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hehe glad that got a laugh. :D
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grimjes Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
looks like the big daddy from bioschock :)
also the green one
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Jun 8, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
That's funny, a few people have made that comparison. Its funny to me because well...[link] I made a Big Daddy MOC. :P
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grimjes Featured By Owner Jun 9, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
i see...well it was the first thought that just slam in on me the minute i saw the head, also the bulky side, the hunchback stand and heavy armoring...its just look like a brother of him XD
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Yeah, that's probably why other people made the comparison to. I just find it amusing because of all the things it could be compared to they compare it to the thing I actually made out of bionicle. :P
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grimjes Featured By Owner Jun 12, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
lolz well then you can compare everything you made with eith other XD
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Zerron-Zero Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that is an interesting use of those lego star wars planet spheres...

Nice moc :)
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner Jun 2, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. That's pretty much why I built this thing, to use one of those in an interesting way. :P
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CoconutFanatic Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Artisan Crafter
Which planet did you use for his eye?
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:icon3rdeye88:
3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 30, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Tatooine.
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:iconmrkillzo:
mrkillzo Featured By Owner May 15, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
i almost got one of those planet things, but i'm not a big fan of starwars. so i let it go. (they do make nice robot parts though)

great use of the planet.

i think of the eye as a big old cannon ball though, or maybe even a grenade. rolling after the other warriors.


"now that they are busy, lets see what he have here..... crap...i can't see it. -___-"
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
They do. There's lots of nice greebly bits found in Star Wars Sets. I'm starting to expand my Horizons and there's a lot of good stuff to be found in those sets as a MOCer. Beyond that I don't really know. That's the only perspective I have on anything no HF/bionicle. Hell that's about the only perspective I take with HF now, as a MOCer. I've given up on the story or builds.

Thanks man.

Eh I thought about making the eye shoot like an energy beam but I thought that was too cheesy and lame so he just has the axes.

Wait, what? :?
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mrkillzo Featured By Owner May 16, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
that last bit, i was saying what Lt. Premod would say.

his eye is rolling around distracting enemies. but he can't see his main goal now...

Lt. Premon: "now that they are busy, lets see what he have here..... crap...i can't see it. -___-"



don't worry about it.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 18, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oooh I got cha. :lol:

Its like "HA take this...Oh...FUCK. :iconfacepalmplz:" Wait, if Premod facepalmed he'd poke his eye. :lol: *facepal* OW! :XD:
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mrkillzo Featured By Owner Jun 23, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
pretty dang much!
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NaiKore Featured By Owner May 12, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
I think its because the people focus on the color scheme, and the eye blends in.
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
:nod: That and the unusual body shape. There's no head and no chest, just a big eyeball torso, arms and legs.
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NaiKore Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Are you going to remake it later?
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3rdeye88 Featured By Owner May 13, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Why would I remake it later? :confused:
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